Week 13 Number 1

Before me research paper was peer reviewed today, I thought that one of my strengths was that I had some good information down on my paper. I also had already started to put information into my double entire journal which had made it easier to write it. These things that I had put in my journal I put in my paper too, so this made it easier on myself later on when I had to do the double entry journal to turn in. One of my weaknesses would be that I did not really read over my paper so there were some grammatical errors. I also did not uses enough sources, and I think that I should have brought it more back to how each thing that I talked about related back to the media, rather than just stating facts. My essay also did not have a picture for my first draft.