Week 13 Number 2

One of the major priorities that had had when revising my paper was that I needed to add more sources. I also needed to figure how to tie in my sources to my paper so that they would make sense with the rest of the paper while still being relevant to my topic. I think that another major issue that I needed to address in my paper was to relate the information that I was giving back to how it had to do with the media, because I was just saying information and not really talking about how it had to do with the media at all. I think that I needed to do all of these things equally, but there really wasn’t anything that was before the other. These things that I needed to do are all requirements, but if I don’t do the other things then my paper isn’t really going to be all that good, because you will not be able to understand it.